would anyone be willing to translate 俺の曲を音 に 起こしてくれないか? ;; im sorry. - Feed Post by ohmai

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  Meliodas

  I think it would be something like: "Will you wake up to the sound of my song [for me]?"

  March 30, 2015 at 6:16pm
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  Meliodas

  Wait I read that wrong... I don't know.... where did you get that sentence from?

  March 30, 2015 at 6:19pm
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  erik20

  I think the translation isn't that bad. The "te-form" is for asking if she always wakes up to the song. Like "Are you waking up to the sound of my song?"
  
  俺の曲 - my composition
  音 - sound
  起こして- wake up (te-form of "okosu")
  くれな - crimson!?
  I wouldn't take the word crimson so serious...
  

  March 30, 2015 at 7:58pm
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  Meliodas

  It's くれない、the negative form of the verb くれる. The problem I face here are the particles. From my perspective 音 is the the indirect object while 俺の曲 is the direct object. If I translated it literally it would probably be something like "Will you wake up my son to the sound?".

  March 30, 2015 at 8:12pm
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  Meliodas

  Song°

  March 30, 2015 at 8:13pm
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  ohmai

  ahh thank you. i was thinking that it was something like, "won't you wake up the sound of my melody?" grammar's always iffy with me so thank you for breaking it down

  March 30, 2015 at 9:57pm
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  Meliodas

  If it was that then it would be something like 俺の曲の音を起こしてくれないの？

  March 31, 2015 at 3:28am