I have a German Exam tomorrow. One of the questions was asking me to write a 50 word composition… - Feed Post by Hutreb
I have a German Exam tomorrow. One of the questions was asking me to write a 50 word composition about weather you like your school or not. So I decided: "Hey, writing this in Japanese would be a great practice!", so I wrote it. I would be very happy if anyone could correct any mistakes or tell me better alternative ways to say what I want to say in Japanese. (Small note; the only truth about mt school in the composition is that my school isn't perfect. Everything else is just made up XD)
Hopefully correct Japanese:
こんにちは！私の名前はヒュトゥレブ、と私は私の学校が好きです。でも私の学校が兎も角好き。私の学校のいい先生と設備を備えた研究室をあります。購買に多い種類のスナックもあります。も清潔です。
English:
"Hello! My name is Hutreb, and I like my school. My school isn't perfect, but I still like it. My school has good teachers and well equipped labs. My school has many varieties of snacks in the school canteen too. My school is also clean."
Hopefully correct Japanese:
こんにちは！私の名前はヒュトゥレブ、と私は私の学校が好きです。でも私の学校が兎も角好き。私の学校のいい先生と設備を備えた研究室をあります。購買に多い種類のスナックもあります。も清潔です。
English:
"Hello! My name is Hutreb, and I like my school. My school isn't perfect, but I still like it. My school has good teachers and well equipped labs. My school has many varieties of snacks in the school canteen too. My school is also clean."
posted by Hutreb
Comments 6
Oh wait, haha. I forgot to write "私の学校は完璧じゃない" before "でも" XD
I'm no master but I believe you could shorten some passages, specially by avoiding writting "私の学校" so many times.
In the part "と私は私の学校" you could just say "と私は学校が好きです"
Instead of "でも私の学校が兎も角好き" you could just add "兎に角好きです"after "完璧じゃない".
In this part " 私の学校のいい先生... " I believe it would be "に" after "学校" as in "学校にいいせんせいがあります"
Other than that I didn't noticed much, I know it's common to omit a lot in the japanese language by doing so you could write more about your school in those 50 words. (ゝω・)ノ
Let's wait for a user that knows japanese better to correct it more deeply. We all can learn a lot if someone does so. (*•̀ᴗ•́*)و ̑̑
Hope I've been of some help（｀・ω・）ゞ
- Thank you very much!
Really, German exam? What level?- When the exam will be tomorrow, how do you know what questions it will be?
- My school and teachers are pretty bad. The German teacher literally gave us the questions and the answers to everything except the answer to the Composition.
