The only bit which is wrong is the "本んお読む" part. I'm assuming you were trying to write本の読む, but romaji keyboard layout made a mess of things. That wouldn't have been correct anyway, because you need to use を particle instead of の to mark the object of the verb (the thing that the verb is acting directly on--"book").
I think the rest is perfectly fine, so:
私は本を読むのが好き。
May 2, 2015 at 12:37pm