The Haiku Open Thread
*Special open thread dedicated to haiku*
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku
aka japanese poetry in general, our own attempts to write in that style (including english, free verse and experiments etc.
-History-
The idea originated there: http://japaneseclass.jp/bulletin/thread/161
(Spammers jazzed up arrangement of "Alternative Lesson Layout" by Liko)
I wrote a haiku-inspired poetry subject on the theme one of its post (beeant June 23, 2010, 11:43 am):
- The Spring of JCJP: The certain feeling of tranquillity, the endless touch of history. The power of nameless users, I´m just passing by -
almost-haiku by Anonymus Lazybones G., local literature corner
-About-
*Post your favourite haiku. Spam as you like. Brainstorming-friendly. Kanji welcomed.*
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku
aka japanese poetry in general, our own attempts to write in that style (including english, free verse and experiments etc.
-History-
The idea originated there: http://japaneseclass.jp/bulletin/thread/161
(Spammers jazzed up arrangement of "Alternative Lesson Layout" by Liko)
I wrote a haiku-inspired poetry subject on the theme one of its post (beeant June 23, 2010, 11:43 am):
- The Spring of JCJP: The certain feeling of tranquillity, the endless touch of history. The power of nameless users, I´m just passing by -
almost-haiku by Anonymus Lazybones G., local literature corner
-About-
*Post your favourite haiku. Spam as you like. Brainstorming-friendly. Kanji welcomed.*
posted by Gituska
Comments 3
"Lazy children wade
through summer, like ducks in pond;
This is the last line."
^Brief poems are the best poems!
Wow! I'm very bad at this, but this one is great: 5-7-5, and even Kigo!
I like it.
And it is good too in reverse order:
this is the last line
through summer like ducks in pond
lazy children wade
More mysterious, that way (no punctuation). A little bit of Zen.
- I feel better now
malamas la someron
this ain't a haiku
